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7．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：
    1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
    Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!

Answer 1

分析 文章介紹著名的浙江烏鎮(zhèn)．烏鎮(zhèn)有大約六千年的歷史，和許多南方小鎮(zhèn)一樣，有小橋流水，有古民居，居民也很友善．你可以在那欣賞到美麗的自然風(fēng)光，還有那小橋，流水，人家．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．
                                                                                              have
Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．
Located
Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．
                                                                  it                                                    over/across
Local people live in old houses，∧they are very friendly．During the day，
                                               加and
you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．
                                              enjoy
The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．
                               attractive                                                                           lights
Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．
                                               去掉
I love an amazing water country!
         the
1．had改為have．文章介紹的是作者的經(jīng)歷，我已經(jīng)去那里參觀過很多次了，不是過去的過去．要改為現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)．
2．Locating改為Located．表示坐落在某個地方，要用be located in．
3．which改為it．前面是介詞like連接的介詞短語，不是句子，不能用連詞構(gòu)成復(fù)合句，而是一個簡單句．
4．through改為over或across．句意表達(dá)的是清澈的小河上有很多小橋，要用over或across，through表示從某物的中間穿過．
5．加and． 前面是一個簡單句，后面也是一個簡單句，要用連接and構(gòu)成并列句．
6．enjoying改為enjoy．動詞不定式．
7．a(chǎn)ttractively改為attractive．句在attractive作系動詞的表語，要用形容詞．
8．light改為lights．各種各樣的燈，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
9．for去掉．句中which引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾前面的pictures，take pictures拍照片，不需要加介詞．
10．a(chǎn)n改為the．文章指的是烏鎮(zhèn)這個小村，特指，要用定冠詞．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．