Question

下面是對(duì)高中新生對(duì)軍訓(xùn)活動(dòng)的民意調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇文章，并表明你的態(tài)度。

贊成觀點(diǎn)（利）	強(qiáng)健體魄；磨煉意志
反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)（弊）	枯燥無趣；浪費(fèi)時(shí)間
你的觀點(diǎn)	互相幫助,克服困難；學(xué)會(huì)守時(shí),有利學(xué)習(xí)；學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活

提示： 軍訓(xùn)military training 新生 freshman
【寫作要求】
文章須包含要點(diǎn)的所有內(nèi)容，詞數(shù)100-120左右。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

Even though military training may present many challenges, overall it can be a very positive experience. An experience of military training helps build up our bodies as well as strengthen our mind. On the contrary, the biggest disadvantages military training has might include things like its tediousness, and in a certain sense, a waste of time.
Even so, the advantages of military training far outweigh the disadvantages. For example, when we have the military training, we learn to help each other and overcome difficulties together, which strengthens our friendship. Additionally, we can learn to be more punctual, which will be of great help to our later study. Last but not the least, it can help us to be independent.
All in all, military training is an experience you will carry with you for the rest of your life! I think we should take an active part in such activities during our school life.

試題分析：本文是篇觀點(diǎn)性議論文，正反兩方面觀點(diǎn)明確，最后要有自己明確的觀點(diǎn)。材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是高中新生對(duì)軍訓(xùn)活動(dòng)的民意調(diào)查，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求讓你給校長(zhǎng)寫信，因此本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如as well as不僅......而且，On the contrary
正相反，a waste of time浪費(fèi)時(shí)間Last but not the least最后但同樣也很重要，All in all總的來說，take an active part in積極參加。這些都是高級(jí)短語為文章增色不少。亮點(diǎn)句子：Even though military training may present many challenges, overall it can be a very positive experience.這句話用了even though 引導(dǎo)狀語從句。Additionally, we can learn to be more punctual, which will be of great help to our later study. 這句用了非限制性定語從句。使文章更加連貫。