Question

某英語報社開辟了中學生習作專欄。本期的話題是：注重外貌日常學習、工作和生活中的細節(jié)。因為細節(jié)往往決定成敗。請你以“we should pay much attention to details”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些看法。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人相關信息。

Answer 1

Should Pay Much Attention to Details
Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing. Since we have realized the importance of details，what should we do? First， we should form the habit of being careful，because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more，we should learn to keep t he balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.
As far as I’m concerned，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first，without which quantity is of no significance.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】范文有些常用的詞組：form the habit of養(yǎng)成…習慣，keep t he balance of 保持平衡嗎，As far as I’m concerned據(jù)我所知，of no significance.不重要，還有范文還有很多好的句型：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details.這句話用了定語從句，But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.這句話用了it做形式主語和賓語從句， We may find that when faced with lots of work，這句話用了狀語從句的省略，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make.這句話用了固定句型， Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details. 這句話用了定語從句，還有文章還使用了First，What’s more，這樣的關聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。