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19．隨著天氣變冷，火災(zāi)頻發(fā)，給人民的生命財(cái)產(chǎn)安全造成巨大損失．請(qǐng)你以校學(xué)生會(huì)（the Students'Union）的名義，給全校同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封信，主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．火災(zāi)帶來(lái)的危害和預(yù)防火災(zāi)的重要性
2．你的建議 （學(xué)習(xí)必要的防火知識(shí)；制定班級(jí)防火安全條例；保持逃生通道暢通；不要玩火等）
語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
fire safety regulations防火安全條例；
take precautions采取預(yù)防措施；
fire extinguisher滅火器
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們以校學(xué)生會(huì)（the Students'Union）的名義，給全校同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封關(guān)于火災(zāi)的信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：火災(zāi)帶來(lái)的危害和預(yù)防火災(zāi)的重要性，你的建議．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為火災(zāi)帶來(lái)的危害和預(yù)防火災(zāi)的重要性．第二部分為建議 （學(xué)習(xí)必要的防火知識(shí)；制定班級(jí)防火安全條例；保持逃生通道暢通；不要玩火等）．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
public security公共安全
in case  以防萬(wàn)一
on account of因?yàn)�，由�?br />appeal to呼吁
urge sb not to do sth 敦促某人不做某事
for the sake of  為了…起見(jiàn)，因?yàn)椤�緣�?br />bear…in mind 牢記…
高分句型一：With winter approaching，it's getting cold and dry and fires are more likely to break out此句為with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)
高分句型二：．It's of great importance to be aware of the potential danger．此句be+of+n可換為be+adj．

解答 With winter approaching，it's getting cold and dry and fires are more likely to break out 高分句型．It's of great importance to be aware of the potential danger．On Nov 15，2010，dozens of people were killed or injured in a fire in Shanghai，which has been the most severe accident concerning public security in our city in recent years，F(xiàn)ires occur frequently every year in our country and cause huge casudties and dramatic losses，As a result，fire has been listed one of the top killers in China．As heavily populated public areas，schools are more mlnerable to fires so it's especially vital for everyone，teacher or student，to improve your awareness of fire prevention in case all of us are threatened with flames．（火災(zāi)帶來(lái)的危害和預(yù)防火災(zāi)的重要性）
On account of the severe fact，we appeal to every class to make fire satety  regulations，which will be an important factor in routime class examination．The student's union is going toorganize drills for excuvation in the near future．Officers from the fire department are due to come to our school next week to teach necessary knowledge and skills．In fire prevention，induding manipulating fire extinguishers．We urge every student not to play with fire and be sure to take care when you are working with fire．The current situation calls for the efforts made by each individual．For the sake of yourself and others，please bear all the things above in mind and remember that this is not a joke as it involves the safety and interests of all the people．If you have any problem，please contact the student's Union．（ 建議：學(xué)習(xí)必要的防火知識(shí)；制定班級(jí)防火安全條例；保持逃生通道暢通；不要玩火等）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧