Question

4．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的李華，你想?yún)⒓用绹�某大學(xué)在你校舉行的"赴美交換生"的選拔賽，請你根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇120-150詞的自我陳述．
1．參加目的；
2．興趣特長；
3．未來打算．
生詞提示：交換生exchange student．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們用英語寫一篇120-150詞的自我陳述，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點包括：光明中學(xué)的李華想?yún)⒓用绹�某大學(xué)在校舉行的"赴美交換生"的選拔賽，參加目的；興趣特長；未來打算．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為參加目的；興趣特長．第二部分為未來打算．
重點短語與句型：
play the violin拉小提琴
be good at 擅長于
get along well with 與…相處的好
 made up my mind 下定決心
make every effort todo sth盡一切努力做某事
 the key to success成功的關(guān)鍵
高分句型一：I'm a 15-year-old boy，who am from Guangming middle school非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．諺語前常用的一句話，as the saying goes，正如諺語所說

解答 Dear editer，
I'm Li Hua．I'm  a 15-year-old boy，who am from Guangming middle school．（高分句型一）I want to join this activity because I want to improve my English and I also want to learn more about America history．I like doing sports and reading books．My favorite sport is basketball and I can play it well．I can sing and play the violin．I am good at drawing，too．I  think I can get along well with my host family．Perhaps I would like to live in a big family with pets．Because I love animals and chatting with other people．Iwill be glad if I can live in a family like this．（參加目的；興趣特長）
I have made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．（高分句型二）Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no men．（未來打算）
Yours，
Lihua

點評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達．
 第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．