Question

【題目】假定你是李華， 你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文，請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫封回信。字數(shù)：120 左右。

1．參加中文學習班;

2. 看中文書刊、電視;

3. 學唱中文歌曲;

4. 交中國朋友。

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Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.

First, it is important to take a Chinese course, where you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Last but not least, you can also make some Chinese friends who can tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Hopefully you will find these suggestions useful to you. Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱作文，體裁為書信。其主要內(nèi)容為學好漢語的建議：1．參加中文學習班;

2. 看中文書刊、電視; 3. 學唱中文歌曲; 4. 交中國朋友。題文要求明確，但要注意表達的條理性。此外，該文的基本時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】本篇范文文采用三段式，結(jié)構(gòu)合理、主次分明。第二段為主體段落，例舉了學好漢語的建議。其中First, Then, Besides, Last but not least的使用增強了文章的條理性。此外，句式的多變也是文章的一大亮點。如非限制性定語從句：…, where you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students；you can also make some Chinese friends who can tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese形式主語：it is important to take a Chinese course；it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese；it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs 狀語從句的省略：whenever possible④find的復合結(jié)構(gòu)：find these suggestions useful.總之，文章出色地完成了寫作任務，是篇考場上的佳作。