Question

7．目前有部分髙中生與父母、老師缺乏必要的溝通，不能相互理解．請你針對這一現(xiàn)象，以"Mutual（相互的）Understanding"為題，寫一篇100-120個詞的英語短文．短文應包含 以下內(nèi)容：
1．說明相互理解的重要性；
2．分析不能相互理解的原因；
3．提出解決這一問題的方法．
Mutual Understanding
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇議論文，要求考生就目前有部分髙中生與父母、老師缺乏必要的溝通，不能相互理解這一現(xiàn)象，以"Mutual（相互的）Understanding"為題，寫一篇短文，寫作要點包括：1．說明相互理解的重要性；2．分析不能相互理解的原因；3．提出解決這一問題的方法．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：undoubtedly （毫無疑問地）；play a  role （發(fā)揮作用）；pave the way for （為…鋪平道路）；have an appetite for （愛好，喜歡）； too…to…（太…而不能…）；meanwhile（同時）；after all（畢竟，終究）；moreover（而且）；be essential to （對…必不可少）．
高分句型：1．As you know，where there is understanding，there is a way．
                  套用諺語"Where there is a will，there is a way（有志者事竟成）"的句型，增強文章的感染力．
                 2．In their eyes，their parents and teachers are too rigid to follow the trend．
                  句中運用短語too rigid to…充分說明了家長和老師與學生在觀點上的差異．
                  3．Moreover，①it's essential to learn to be a little more tolerant．②Only so can they understand each other better．
                   ①it在句中作形式主語，真正的主語是不定式短語 to learn to be a little more tolerant；②副詞only用在句首，句子用倒裝．

解答 As you know，where there is understanding，there is a way（高分句型一）．Mutual understanding undoubtedly plays a key role in communication．It brings harmony，and even paves the way for integration into society．
However，some students often complain their parents and teachers hardly understand them．They have an appetite for fashions and excitements．In their eyes，their parents and teachers are too rigid to follow the trend（高分句型二）．Meanwhile，their parents and teachers，growing in a totally different tradition，have a negative opinion of their behavior．
Personally，both should acknowledge the gap between them．After all，everyone is unique in the world．Moreover，it's essential to learn to be a little more tolerant．Only so can they understand each other better（高分句型三）．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否覆蓋了所給要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，使得上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，使文章淺顯易懂，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．