Question

【題目】目前中學(xué)生中有很多人存在一些學(xué)習(xí)和生活上的心理問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇題為“How to Be Mentally Healthy”的短文。
你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
1).心理問(wèn)題的危害有哪些？
2).如何解決心理問(wèn)題？（如：與同學(xué)朋友溝通，向心理老師尋求幫助等）
注意：1).可參照文章開(kāi)頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象；
2).詞數(shù)100左右（標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
3).文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：心理老師psychology teacher
How to Be Mentally Healthy
Many of us students now have some mental problems,which mainly come from our studies and lives.

Answer 1

【答案】How to Be Mentally Healthy

Many of us students now have some mental problems,which mainly come from our studies and lives.

Such problems have bad effects on students both physically and mentally.Some are so worried about exams that they can't fall asleep at night.As a result,they feel sleepy in the day time and can't concentrate in class.Others can't get along well with their parents or classmates.They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

In fact, there're many ways to handle our mental problems. Firstly, communication is important. When we talk about our problems with our friends,we can feel greatly relieved.Secondly,we can turn to our teachers or psychology teacher for help.Finally,we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and lives.I believe these methods will help us live and study happily.

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