Question

9．最近我校舉辦了一次英語(yǔ)書法比賽．大部分同學(xué)們積極參與，但少數(shù)同學(xué)書寫不好，也不愿改善．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給《二十一世紀(jì)報(bào)》寫一篇短文，分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法．

現(xiàn)象	一些學(xué)生不善書寫，也不愿改善書寫
原因	1．可以借助電腦，沒(méi)有必要練字；  2．功課太忙，沒(méi)時(shí)間練字； 3．練字見(jiàn)效慢，很難練好．
你的看法	…

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；    2．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition．In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition（高分句型一）．Many students took an active part in the activity．However，some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting．The reasons are as follows：
On one hand，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer（高分句型二）．On the other hand，they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice．Besides，practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make great progress in a short time．
In my view，Students'beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves．What's more，good handwriting is always appreciated by people，especially by teachers．Therefore，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition
為了激發(fā)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，豐富我們的課余生活，我們舉行了一次英語(yǔ)書法比賽．
高分句型二：
On one hand，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer．
一方面，他們認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，因?yàn)樗麄兛梢允褂糜?jì)算機(jī)提高自己的筆跡．

解答 In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life，we held an English Handwriting Competition（高分句型一）．Many students took an active part in the activity．However，some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting．The reasons are as follows：
   On one hand，they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer（高分句型二）．On the other hand，they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice．Besides，practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make great progress in a short time．
   In my view，Students'beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves．What's more，good handwriting is always appreciated by people，especially by teachers．Therefore，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．