Question

【題目】假定英語課,老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

During the recent harvest festival, my parents and I visited the Pear Village , where was a great destination for photographers. The plot was filled with green pear trees and many kinds of flowers. The three of them were very excited. On arriving here，we were warmly welcome by the local people. Then, we picked pears, had a picnic and shared photos took in and around the orchards (果園）. After that，we talked with the working farmers happily. They were simply and kind. They said the harvests benefited all the residents, so they recently hosted at the festival. They were looking forward to welcoming more visitor to their village. The time passes quickly. We were lost in enjoying ourselves before we realized we had to say goodbye to the villagers. It was really unforgettable visit.

Answer 1

【答案】1. where→which

2. them→us

3.heret→here

4.welcome→welcomed

5.took→taken

6.simply→simple

7.刪掉at

8.visitor→visitors

9.passes→passed

10.unforgettable前加冠詞an

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了我和父母去參加收獲節(jié)的故事。

1.考查定語從句。分析句子可知，本句為帶有非限制性定語從句的復(fù)合句，其中my parents and I visited the Pear Village為主句，句中the Pear Village為先行詞，在其后的定語從句中作主語，根據(jù)定語從句關(guān)系代詞的用法，先行詞指物，在從句中作主語時，關(guān)系代詞用which ，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。故where改為which。

2.考查代詞。結(jié)合上文可知，我和父母一起去the Pear Village，所以，此處表示我們?nèi)�人都非常興奮。所以them改為us。

3.考查副詞。句意：一到那里，我們就受到當(dāng)?shù)厝藷崃业臍g迎。結(jié)合句意，此處要用副詞there，表示the Pear Village，故here改為there。

4.考查被動語態(tài)。句意同上。根據(jù)句意，我們是被歡迎，所以語態(tài)用被動語態(tài)，動詞要用過去分詞。故welcome改為welcomed。

5.考查非謂語動詞。句意：之后，我們摘了梨，野餐，分享了在果園里和周圍拍的照片。take photos拍照片，本句中，share為謂語動詞，所以take為非謂語動詞，因為photos和take為動賓關(guān)系，take要用過去分詞作定語，表示被動含義。故took改為taken。

6.考查形容詞。句意：他們簡樸而善良。分析句子可知，本句為主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，所以表語要用形容詞。故simply改為simple。

7.考查介詞。本句中host the festival舉辦節(jié)日，節(jié)日前不用介詞。故刪去at。

8.考查名詞。visitor游客，可數(shù)名詞。句中提到更多的游客，所以visitor要用復(fù)數(shù)。故visitor改為visitors。

9.考查時態(tài)。結(jié)合全文，講述我和父母去參加收獲節(jié)，表示過去的事實，所以時態(tài)要用一般過去時。故passes改為passed。

10.考查冠詞。句意：那真是一次難忘的拜訪。泛指“一次難忘的拜訪”。unforgettable為元音音素開頭，所以前面要用不定冠詞an。故unforgettable前加冠詞an。