Question

20．假如你是英國的Mike，你的朋友謝蕾打算到國外留學，她寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學生最受國外高校青睞．請你根據(jù)下列要點給對方寫一封回信：
1．語言是道硬門檻；
2．適應(yīng)能力很重要；
3．興趣愛好被看重；
4．要有社會責任感．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Xie Lei，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）
This is some of my advice．I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇書信類作文．假如你是英國的Mike，你的朋友謝蕾打算到國外留學，她寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學生最受國外高校青睞．請你根據(jù)下列要點給對方寫一封回信：1．語言是道硬門檻； 2．適應(yīng)能力很重要； 3．興趣愛好被看重； 4．要有社會責任感．需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色．注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少．
【亮點說明】I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．包含一個賓語從句；Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．包含了一個表語從句和一個賓語從句；As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course．包含一個非限制性定語從句；Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．包含一個定語從句．
Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）
Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Xie Lei，
      I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
      As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）
       This is some of my advice．I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Mike

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．