Question

【題目】昨天上午，你校組織了一場“和榜樣學(xué)習(xí)”的勵志宣講會。宣講會，來自各個年級的學(xué)霸們都講述了自己的學(xué)習(xí)心得并分享了具體的學(xué)習(xí)方法。作為一名高三學(xué)生，你聽完宣講會后感觸頗深。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇參會感想。

寫作要點：

1.簡單總結(jié)并評價這次宣講會；

2.你從宣講會中學(xué)到了什么。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3.宣講會：an inspirational meeting

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Answer 1

【答案】Yesterday morning, an inspirational meeting was held in our school. Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies. In my opinion, the meeting was a big success, and what it provided for us was quite valuable.

As for me, I have learnt a lot from the meeting. First, I have realized a positive attitude plays an important role in our studies. No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination. Then, I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study. Lastly, I have become more confident about myself. I strongly believe I can prove my ability through hard work.

【解析】這篇作文要求寫一篇會后感想，要點應(yīng)包括宣講會的大體內(nèi)容以及自己從中學(xué)到了什么。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【亮點說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，能夠?qū)⒁�點描寫完整，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了較多的復(fù)雜句式，例如Many top students in our school shared their study experience and uniqur learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies.這個句子包含了一個定語從句，No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination.這個句子包含了一個no matter引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。這些高級句式的使用顯示出了作者深厚的英語功底。