Question

【題目】假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會主席。即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮。

1．時間：6月6日 上午9：00； 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂廳；

2．介紹畢業(yè)典禮的活動；

3．希望Jeff能夠發(fā)表簡短的演講。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)80左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jeff,

__________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union, writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.

The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9:00 am, on June 6th. It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts. Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality. Should our graduation ceremony ended up with your speech, it would do us a great honor.

Please reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章主題和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，但需要考生在寫作時，合理發(fā)揮想象力，做到有話可說，使文章的表達(dá)自然，豐滿。

注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.通篇以一般將來時為主。2不能簡單羅列要點(diǎn)，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使行文連貫。3. 注意使用高級詞匯和句型，以提高文章的檔次。4. 注意字?jǐn)?shù)：80字左右。5.規(guī)范謄寫，使卷面整潔。

此外，應(yīng)注意除了題干中給出的三條要點(diǎn)，在信的開頭應(yīng)點(diǎn)明寫信背景，即題干中隱含的信息：假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會主席。即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮。從而點(diǎn)明來信目的；最后也要有結(jié)尾，如：盼盡快回復(fù)等。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

It will start with the School Anthem(校歌), which is followed by various performances raging from dances to martial arts.使用了定語從句以及動詞現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語，即非謂語動詞的用法。

Moreover, videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality.使用了動詞過去分詞作后置定語。

Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech, it would do us a great honor.使用了虛擬語氣，同時do sb. an honor（是某人的榮幸）用得也不錯。