Question

【題目】假如你是李華，假期觀看了主題是人與自然的電影《狼圖騰》 (Wolf Totem)深有感觸。你寫了一篇觀后感準備給你們學校的校報英語版投稿，現(xiàn)在你通過電子郵件將這篇觀后感發(fā)給英國筆友Tom，請他幫忙在下周三之前完成修改，并把這部電影推薦給他。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右:

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How is everything going? During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature. The film is really a hit in China. Have you heard of it?

After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper. I have attached it to this email. Will you please help me correct the grammatical mistakes and polish the article? If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me.

By the way, the film is really wonderful. I know you are a film fan. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封書信，請英國筆友Tom幫忙修改你寫的電影《狼圖騰》的觀后感，并把這部電影推薦給他。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文；

人稱：第一人稱；

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時；

結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分-總法

第二步：列提綱（重點單詞和詞組）

hear of；deeply touched；intend to；contribute to；attach..to；if possible；appreciate；by the way

recommend...to；convince；fall in love with；as well；look forward to等；

第三步：連詞成句

1. During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature.

2. After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper.

3. If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me.

4. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you.

5. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well.

6. Looking forward to your early reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表并列補充關(guān)系：and；if possible；by the way等；

2.表因果關(guān)系：Therefore等；

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改