Question

17．假如你是某中學學生李華，你的加拿大筆友John來信說，五月份他要和父母來山東旅游．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，給他寫一封回信．
1．推薦的景點：泰山、大明湖、孔子故里；
2．推薦的理由．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：孔子Confucius．
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to learn that you and your parents will come toShandong in May．Born and growing up inShandong，I know theprovince quite well．Therefore I can recomand some places of interest to you and serve as
your guide．
First of all，you should climbMount tai scenic spot．Not onlydoes ithave beautiful scenery but also thebuidings on it have historical value．Quite a few emperors used to come here and left a lot of relicswhich arewell worth seeing．What's more，Da Ming Lake is another place that is can't miss．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious foodas well as xiangsheng which is a traditional style of entertainment．Finally，you won't lose the chance to be in Qufu，where Confucius was born．I know you have been longing for a visit to it．Confucius is thegreatest educationist in China，and many schoolsto learn Chinese culture which are built in foreign contries are called Confucius College．In a word，you'll have a good time with me as your tour guide．
I am looking forward to your coming．
Faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹山東景點的書信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信目的；二介紹推薦的景點：泰山、大明湖和孔子故里；以及推薦的理由．三期盼對方的到來．
高分句型：
1．Not only does it  have beautiful scenery but also the buidings on it have historical value．句子里Not only 位于句首，句子 does it  have beautiful scenery 用了倒裝，和but also 構成固定句式，表示"不但…而且"．
它不但擁有美麗的風景而且它的建筑有歷史價值．
2．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious food as well as xiangsheng，which is a traditional  style of entertainment 句子里 as well as 表示"也包括"；which引導定語從句，代指先行詞 xiangsheng；a traditional  style of entertainment 表示"一種傳統(tǒng)的娛樂方式"．
你可以欣賞到多彩的大自然美景，美味的食物以及相聲，相聲是一種傳統(tǒng)的娛樂方式．

解答 Dear Mike，
      I'm glad to learn that you and your parents will come to Shandong in May．Born and growing up in Shandong，I  know the province  quite well．Therefore，I can  recomand some places of interest  to you  and serve as
your guide．（表明書信目的）
      First of all，you should climb Mount tai scenic spot．Not only does it  have beautiful scenery but also the buidings on it have historical value．【高分句型一】Quite a few emperors used to come here and left a lot of relics which are well worth seeing．What's more，Da Ming Lake is another place that is can't miss．You can enjoy the colorful nature，delicious food as well as xiangsheng，which is a traditional  style of entertainment．【高分句型】Finally，you won't lose the chance to be in Qufu，where Confucius was born．I know you have been longing for a visit to it．Confucius is the greatest educationist in China，and many  schools to learn Chinese culture which are built in foreign contries are called Confucius College．In a word，you'll have a good time with me as your tour guide．（紹推薦的景點：泰山、大明湖和孔子故里；以及推薦的理由．）
      I am looking forward to your coming．（期盼對方的到來）
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
書面表達試題一般都由"情景"和"要求"兩部分構成．"情景"中包括所寫材料的目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等，一般在書面表達題的前半部分；而"要求"一般在書面表達的后半部分，以"注意"形式給出，實際上是對考生提出的要求．因而考生對于題目所提供的說明，應認真分析、反復推敲，搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求，抓住所要表達的信息點．