Question

12．請你以"Son，Back to School!"為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文，描述漫畫內(nèi)容，并結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，就漫畫的主題發(fā)表感想．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖作文．寫作時，首先要提煉要點(diǎn)，包括：圖片展示的內(nèi)容，孩子沉迷電視的危害，提前建議；其次，要注意以第一人稱的口吻，如實(shí)的描寫現(xiàn)狀；最后要注意時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為佳．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
without emotion 無動于衷
take up 占用
bear in mind 記住
get addicted to 沉迷于
It's just a picture，but every day，in some families，it does happen．
句中does構(gòu)成對謂語的強(qiáng)調(diào)．
It's obvious that watching TV too long is harmful to us students because it really takes up a lot of time and disturbs our regular schedule．
句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的that從句；because連接原因狀語從句．
we must bear in mind that we should be responsible for ourselves and never get addicted to anything that does harm to us physically and mentally．
句中第一個that連接賓語從句；第二個that引導(dǎo)定語從句．

解答 In the picture，we can see the parents are toughly pulling their little kid out of the TV，and the kid is just like a fool without emotion．It's just a picture，but every day，in some families，it does happen．（高分句型一）【描述圖片內(nèi)容】
    It's obvious that watching TV too long is harmful to us students because it really takes up a lot of time and disturbs our regular schedule．（高分句型二） Secondly，the happiness is temporary but the cost is the permanent damage to our health and morality．What's more，we will have no chance to develop our social skills and friendship with others if we seldom go out to experience the rich and lively world．【說明沉迷電視的危害】
    In brief，we must bear in mind that we should be responsible for ourselves and never get addicted to anything that does harm to us physically and mentally．（高分句型三）【提出建議】

點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．