Question

【題目】短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共

有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分;格式錯誤不給分。

Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying , played with Lily. At last his mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】there was 改成there were

【2】cry改成crying

【3】can’t改為couldn’t.

【4】find前加 to

【5】on the same time改成at the same time.

【6】careful改成carefully

【7】palyed 改成 playing 或之前加and

【8】his mother 改成her mother.

【9】that 改成 which

【10】with劃掉

【解析】

試題分析：作者和朋友在動物園遇到一個孩子走丟了，決定幫助她找媽媽。她們各司其職，把小朋友哄好了，并幫助她找到了媽媽。每個人都應(yīng)該盡力地幫助別人，世界才會變得更美好。

【1】there was 改成there were；考查there be句型。句子主語為lots of people，故謂語應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)，was改成were。

【2】cry改成crying；考查動詞。Find sb doing sth“發(fā)現(xiàn)某人正在做某事”，故cry 改成crying。

【3】can’t改為couldn’t；考查時態(tài)。She was lost and can’t find her mother.句子前半段為過去時態(tài)，切用and聯(lián)接，時態(tài)保持一致，can’t 改成couldn’t。

【4】find前加 to；考查動詞搭配。Try one’s best to do sth“盡力做某事”，故find 前加to。

【5】on the same time改成at the same time.；考察介詞。At the same time 是固定搭配，“同時，盡管如此”，沒有on the same time的結(jié)構(gòu)。

【6】careful改成carefully；考查副詞。Carefully修飾look after，副詞修飾動詞和動詞詞組，故careful改成carefully。

【7】palyed 改成 playing 或之前加and；考查動詞搭配。The little girl stopped crying , played with Lily.此處played的用法不明，如果sopped和played并列，表示“小女孩停止了哭泣，并和Lily玩�！�，那么played前加and表示和stopped的并列關(guān)系。如果played和crying并列，那played應(yīng)改為playing，stop doing sth“停止做某事”，句意為“小女孩不哭了，也不和Lily玩了”，兩者亦可。

【8】his mother 改成her mother.；考查人稱代詞。根據(jù)上下文可知，此處為小女孩的媽媽，故his應(yīng)改為her。

【9】that 改成 which；考查非限定性定語從句。Which用于非限定性定語從句，不能用that，故把that 換成which。

【10】with劃掉；考查短語搭配。Help with“幫助某人做某事”，與句意不符，刪掉with。