Question

10．假如你是李華，在倫敦做交換生，昨天你的室友Tony在校園摔倒后住院．請給校求助中心寫封郵件，尋找?guī)椭鶷ony的中國學(xué)生．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢．
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
DearSir/MadamI am Li Hua，an exchange student from China．I am writing to ask you to look for a Chinese student．
Yesterday，my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．Justat that moment，a Chinese girl came to him．She gave him first aid and called an ambulance．Thanks to the kind girl，Tony was sent to hospital in time．But the girl left quietly before Tony could express his thanks．The girl is about 18 years old and of medium height with short hair．Tony is eager to meet her to express his sincere thanks．Could you please help find her？
Looking forwards to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考試在寫作時需注意，由于該事件是發(fā)生在過去的，所以時態(tài)需用一般過去時．
（高分句型一）my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．
該句使用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，意思是當…時候；
（高分句型二）But the girl left quietly before Tony could express his thanks．
before引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句，意思是還沒來得及；
高級詞匯：on the way to 在去某個地方的路上； fall down 跌倒；Thanks to 幸虧；medium height 中等身材；be eager to 渴望做；

解答 Dear Sir/madam，
   I am Li Hua，an exchange student from China．I am writing to ask you to look for a Chinese student．
   Yesterday，（高分句型一）my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fell down and could hardly move．Just at that moment，a Chinese girl came to him．She gave him first aid and called an ambulance．Thanks to the kind girl，Tony was sent to hospital in time．（高分句型二）But the girl left quietly before Tony could express his thanks．The girl is about 18 years old and of medium height with short hair．Tony is eager to meet her to express his sincere thanks．Could you please help find her？
   Looking forwards to your reply．
                                                                               Yours，
                                                                               Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，寫作時應(yīng)注意緊密聯(lián)系所給提示，用準確的語言，簡潔明了的將文章表達清楚．