Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the furrier it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eight silver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. His sisters cried loudly.

Aaron took a1ong two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlateh stood as patiently as ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.

The sun was shining when Aaron 1eft. Suddenly the weather changed, and after a while it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aaron’s boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer on the road. Z1ateh bleated as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh along the way. But he could see nothing.

Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came near it, he realized that it was a large haystack covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay was food for Zlateh.

Zlateh, sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaron ate his bread，but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Z1ateh and realized that he would not be starved to death. Goat’s milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the wind quieted down.

Paragraph 1:

On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells.

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Paragraph 2:

The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family.

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Answer 1

【答案】On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing if sleigh bells. He got out of the haystack, and found that it was not far from the road. Aaron shouted loudly to the peasant who drove the sleigh for help. Finally, they were saved. Aaron had made up his mind in the haystack that he would never part with Zlateh. Therefore, the peasant pointed out the way to the village. Aaron made his way home together with Zlateh, his loyal friend.

The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family. The whole family, including Aaron’s father, rushed out to meet them in great excitement. Aaron told them in tears how he had found the haystack and how Zlateh had fed him with her milk in the past few days. Aaron’s sisters kissed and hugged Zlateh and Aaron’s father gave the goat a special treat of chopped carrots. Nobody ever again thought of selling Zlateh, who had been an important family member to them.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)作文。

通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，父親讓Aaron去鎮(zhèn)上把老山羊Zlateh賣掉，Aaron需要在晚上之前把山羊送出去，第二天帶著錢(qián)回來(lái)。結(jié)果半路開(kāi)始下雪，Aaron迷了路，他知道如果他們找不到避難所，就會(huì)凍死。他找到了一個(gè)被雪覆蓋的大草堆，為自己和山羊挖了一個(gè)窩。干草里總是暖和的而且干草是Zlateh的食物，Aaron靠著Zlateh的羊奶活著。雪下了三天，風(fēng)平息了。

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是：到了第四天早晨，Aaron聽(tīng)見(jiàn)雪橇的鈴聲。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述Aaron他們得救的經(jīng)過(guò)，開(kāi)雪橇農(nóng)夫給他指了路，Aaron決定和他忠實(shí)的朋友Zlateh一起回家。第二段開(kāi)頭是：Aaron和Zlateh要來(lái)的消息，使全家人都非常高興。本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)家人見(jiàn)到Aaron的Zlateh的情況，全家人都非常高興。Aaron的姐妹們親吻并擁抱了Zlateh，Aaron的父親給了Zlateh一頓特別的美味——切碎的胡蘿卜。再也沒(méi)有人想到賣掉Zlateh了，因?yàn)閷?duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō)，他是一個(gè)重要的家庭成員。

最后還要注意所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。