Question

13．請寫一篇英語短文簡要介紹Madame Curie，向學校英語報投稿，要點如下：
1.1867年出生于波蘭（ Poland）一個教師家庭．
2．從小愛學習并希望成為科學家，16歲中學畢業(yè)，24歲就讀巴黎大學，生活儉樸，學習刻苦．
3．一生致力于科學研究，于1903年和1911年兩次分別榮獲諾貝爾物理獎和諾貝爾化學獎．
注意：1．詞數100 左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 考查提綱類作文寫作，該作文給出了部分的文字提示．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語show interest in 對．．感興趣；have no chance of 沒有機會做某事；be admitted to 被錄取；In addition 此外；In addition，Madame Curie held such an attitude towards life that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them這個句子運用到such …that 如此．．以致于；Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．這個句子中運用not only..but also 引導兩個句子第一個句子用部分倒裝；
Born into an intellectual family in Poland on Nov.7，1867，Marie Curie，also known as Madame Curie，showed great interest in physics when she was young．（高分句型一）
Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time，she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics．（高分句型二）
Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．（高分句型三）

解答 Born into an intellectual family in Poland on Nov.7，1867，Marie Curie，also known as Madame Curie，showed great interest in physics when she was young．（高分句型一）Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time，she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics．（高分句型二）In addition，Madame Curie held such an attitude towards life that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them．
      With strong will and great determination，Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium，which enabled her to win the Nobel Prize．Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．（高分句型三）Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧