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修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Jin Jing，

Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following

advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

Yours,

Lily

 

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6.him改為them

7.trying改為try

8.share改為shares

9.unless改為if

10.possibly改為possible

【解析】

試題分析：Lily在信中對(duì)金晶的問(wèn)題提出了建議：要相信自己， 微笑面對(duì)同學(xué)，讓他們相信你是友好的；先試著與一個(gè)和你同樣害羞的或與你有同樣愛(ài)好的同學(xué)交談，可以問(wèn)一些學(xué)習(xí)上的問(wèn)題，談?wù)劰餐膼?ài)好；幫助學(xué)習(xí)和生活上有困難的同學(xué)。

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