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【題目】近來，“中國式過馬路”Chinese Style of Crossing Streets在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上熱炒。請結(jié)合下面表格寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

現(xiàn)象	很多人過馬路時不看紅綠燈
原因	1.缺乏交通安全意識 2.匆忙趕時間
措施	1.遵守交通規(guī)則 2.你自己的建議……

注意： 1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和班級名稱。

2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞左右，不可逐字翻譯。

3. 參考詞語：缺乏…意識 lack awareness of

Chinese Style of Crossing Streets

Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently.

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Answer 1

【答案】Chinese Style of Crossing Streets

Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently.

Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. Some people lack awareness of traffic safety. Others are so busy that they don’t want to wait for the green light for a while.

However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others. So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents. For example, whoever breaks the traffic rules, he or she should be punished.

As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules. What’s more, I will try my best to advise people to follow the rules. Only in this way can we cross streets safely.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，根據(jù)題干可知要求學(xué)生圍繞“中國式過馬路”Chinese Style of Crossing Streets”寫一篇文章，寫作內(nèi)容要包括：a.簡單敘述一下很多人過馬路時不看紅綠燈的現(xiàn)象b.列舉兩點(diǎn)出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因：缺乏交通安全意識以及匆忙趕時間c.對此現(xiàn)象提出解決的措施：遵守交通規(guī)則等（考生要自我拓展）

同時也要注意：

在寫這篇文章時：1.通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。2.要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡單的羅列。重點(diǎn)是要從提示句的關(guān)鍵詞出發(fā)，圍繞關(guān)鍵詞開拓思路，發(fā)揮聯(lián)想，記錄下聯(lián)想到的東西，可以是句子或是單詞詞組�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢。寫這篇作文時，學(xué)生可以采取簡單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法，使句型變幻多樣。同時盡量使用熟悉的詞匯及短語，尤其注意不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語，并在力所能及的范圍之內(nèi)使用復(fù)合句或者諺語，增加獲得高分的可能性。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】1. For example, whoever breaks the traffic rules, he or she should be punished.比如說，不論是誰違反了交通規(guī)則，他都應(yīng)該受到懲罰。（運(yùn)用了whoever作主語的從句；運(yùn)用了被動語態(tài)）

2. Only in this way can we cross streets safely只有這樣我們才能成功過街（運(yùn)用了“only+狀語”位于句首，要用倒裝）