Question

9．假如你是李華，你所在的城市出現(xiàn)"共享單車"，請寫一篇倡導(dǎo)低碳出行的演講稿，要點如下：
 
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù) 80-100；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear classmates，
The bright-colored public bikes-the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets．With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost．Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health．They also have other advantages．You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them．Therefore，why don't we start cycling today？．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost
隨著空氣污染和交通擁堵的街道上經(jīng)常陷入困境，這mobikes提供以最低的成本，低碳出行方式．
高分句型二：
Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health．
他們不僅零空氣污染，還可以減少交通堵塞，而不是坐在長時間的一個小小的空間，騎mobikes能你的身體得到鍛煉，對你的健康有一定的好處．

解答 Dear classmates，
The bright-colored pu blic bikes-the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets． With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost（高分句型一）．Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health（高分句型二）．They also have other advantages．You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them．Therefore，why don't we start cycling today？

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．