8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
To show our love for poor kids lived in mountainous areas，our school hold a special activity last week in our school square．Its purpose was to making sure those poor kids have a warm winter．All the teachers and students in our school took an actively part in this activity．We gave away 478pieces of clothes and 256pairs of shoe altogether．After be sorted，they will be sent to those in the need．I believe what they did will make a great difference to those poor kids．Although we all learn to care for others，the world will be more comfortable to live．

分析 本文主要講述我們學校舉行了一個特別的活動，通過贈送衣服和鞋子來幫助貧窮的孩子們度過冬天．同時，希望我們學會關心別人，這個世界將會更適合居�。�

解答 To show our love for poor kids lived in mountainous areas，our school hold a special activity last week in our school square．Its purpose was to making sure those poor kids have a warm winter．All the teachers and students in our school took an actively part in this activity．We gave away 478pieces of clothes and 256pairs of shoe altogether．After be sorted，they will be sent to those in the need．I believe what they did will make a great difference to those poor kids．Although we all learn to care for others，the world will be more comfortable to live∧．
詳解：
1．lived改為living 考查現(xiàn)在分詞．kids與live之間是主謂關系，用現(xiàn)在分詞短語living in mountainous areas作定語修飾kids．
2．hold改為held 考查動詞時態(tài)．根據(jù)句中時間狀語last week表示過去時間，要用一般過去時態(tài)，hold的過去式是held．
3．making改為make 考查動詞不定式．動詞不定式的一般式是不定式符號to+動詞原形，此處是動詞不定式作表語．
4．a(chǎn)ctively改為active 考查形容詞．take a part in意為"參加"，是固定搭配，part前可加形容詞作修飾語，副詞actively的形容詞是active．
5．shoe改為shoes 考查名詞復數(shù)．shoe是可數(shù)名詞，因pairs是復數(shù)形式，shoe也要用復數(shù)形式．
6．be改為being 考查動名詞．a(chǎn)fter是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式，動名詞被動式是being done，be要用being．
7．去掉the 考查固定搭配．in need意為"在危難中，在危急中"，是固定搭配．
8．they改為we 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意，應是"我相信我們所做的"，應是"我們"而不是"他們"．
9．Although改為If 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意，應是"如果我們都學會關心別人"表示條件，不是表示轉折．
10．加in 考查介詞．live是不及物動詞，與world是動賓關系，其后要加介詞in．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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A．To keep them in good quality
B．To make them taste good．
C．To make them look fresh
D．To make them sell cheaply．
34．What does the underlined word"deteriorate"in Paragraph 3mean？A
A．Grow worse
B．Grow better．
C．Remain the same
D．Die out．
35．What is more helpful in preventing cancer？C
A．Vitamin C
B．Frozen fruit and vegetables．
C．Fresh fruit and vegetables
D．Anthocyanins．

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科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：閱讀理解

18．Many a young person tells me he wants to be a writer．I always encourage such people，but I also explain that there's a big difference between"being a writer"and writing．In most cases these people are dreaming of wealth and fame，not the long hours alone at a typewriter．"You've got to want to write，"I say to them，"not want to be a writer．"
The reality is that writing is a lonely，private and poor-paying thing．For every writer kissed by fortune there are thousands more whose wishes are never rewarded．When I left a 20-year job in the U．S．Coast Guard to become a freelance writer，I had no hopes at all．What I did have was a friend who found me my room in a New York apartment building．It didn't even matter that it was cold and had no bathroom．I immediately bought a used typewriter and felt like a real writer．
After a year or so，however，I still hadn't got a break and began to doubt myself．It was so hard to sell a story that I hardly made enough to eat．But I knew I wanted to write．I had dreamed about it for years．I wasn't going to be one of those people who die wondering：What if？I would keep putting my dream to the test even though it meant living with uncertainty and fear of failure．This is the shadow（陰影）land of hope，and anyone with a dream must learn to live there．

33．The passage is meant toB．
A．encourage young people to seek good jobs
B．warn young people of the suffering a successful writer has to experience
C．show young people it's unrealistic for writers to seek wealth and fame
D．a(chǎn)dvise young people to give up their idea of becoming a writer
34．Why did the author begin to doubt himself after the first year of his writing work？D．
A．He wasn't able to have a rest for a whole year．
B．He wasn't able to produce a single book．
C．He found his dream would never come true．
D．He hadn't seen a change for the better．
35．What can be concluded from the passage？C．
A．Famous writers usually live a poor and lonely life．
B．Writers often find their work interesting and rewarding．
C．The chances for a writer to become successful are small．
D．A writer's success depends on luck rather than on efforts．

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