Question

據(jù)世界衛(wèi)生組織（WHO）統(tǒng)計(jì)，每年有200萬人死于吸煙，60萬人死于二手煙。為此，我國規(guī)定，從今年5月1 日起，嚴(yán)禁在公共場所吸煙。請你結(jié)合下面所給要點(diǎn)，以“Saying No to Smoking”為題，談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Α?

1. 吸煙有害；

2. 吸煙導(dǎo)致咳嗽、肺癌等疾�。�

3. 吸煙影響青少年成長；

4. 二手煙同樣有害；

5. 你的態(tài)度：面對別人吸煙、給煙怎么辦？

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右； 2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手煙

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Saying No to Smoking

　　According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and outside from May 1 on.

As is known to all, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。