Question

【題目】假設你叫李華，是一名高三學生。自從進入高三以后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學晚上學習到很晚。他們邊學習邊吃零食或喝可樂，早上則由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感覺這樣會對身體有害。請你根據(jù)這種現(xiàn)象給《英語周報》寫一封信反映上述情況，并談談自己的想法。

注意：(1) 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

(2) 詞數(shù)：120左右。

Dear Editor,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I was in Grade Three, I have found that some of the students in our class study harder than before. They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Cola, which is bad for their health. In the morning, due to staying up too late, some students "sleep in " and have to go to school without breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely o harm to their health.

In my opinion, though we are under heavy study pressure, we should try to eat properly and get as much rest as possible. Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.

I wonder if you agree with me. I am looking forward t hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是寫一封信，關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，本文的主題是反應學生不吃早飯這一現(xiàn)象，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系。靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】學生寫作要有靈活性，同時要表現(xiàn)出較好的英語語言表達能力。文章使用了很好的短語和句子： study late into night，due to 由于，staying up 熬夜，In my opinion，under heavy study pressure學習壓力大，look forward to doing 盼望做某事，found that some of the students in our class study harder than before是賓語從句，which is bad for their health，which is also a bad habit and will surely o harm to their health是定語從句，Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.是倒裝句。