Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意: 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

Answer 1

【答案】

【小題1】wanted后面加to

【小題2】come改為came

【小題3】have改為having

【小題4】immediate改為immediately

【小題5】on改為at

【6】Neither改為none

【7】was改為were

【8】去掉were或者looked

【9】but改為and

【答案10】a改為an

【解析】

試題分析：考查時(shí)態(tài)、伴隨狀語(yǔ)從句、介詞搭配等。

【小題1】第一段第二句He wanted teach me …want to do sth.為固定短語(yǔ)，意為想要干某事，故wanted后面加to

【小題2】第一段第三句My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting 本文描述的是過(guò)去的事情，動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用過(guò)去式，故come改為came

【小題3】第二段第一句One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.前句有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，而此句又無(wú)連詞，后句不可能用動(dòng)詞原形，應(yīng)用伴隨狀語(yǔ)從句，另表示的是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故要用ing形式，故have改為having

【小題4】第二段第二句My uncles immediate jumped up ，immediate 是形容詞不能修飾動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)變?yōu)楦痹~來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞jump，故immediate改為immediately

【小題5】第二段第二句shot their arrows on the bird ，shot…at…是固定短語(yǔ)，意為瞄準(zhǔn)，本句意為他們把箭瞄準(zhǔn)鳥(niǎo)，故on改為at

【6】第二段第三句Neither of the arrows hit the target.，neither是兩者中任何一個(gè)都不，文中他們不可能只射了兩箭，應(yīng)用none，表示三者或三者以上的都不，故Neither改為none

【7】第二段第四句Suddenly the arrows was flying down 主語(yǔ)為arrows 是復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故was改為were

【8】第二段第五句they were looked like rain，were looked like是指被看起來(lái)，這里只需用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)即可，有兩種表達(dá)方式，一是直接用look like，二是將用be like短語(yǔ)，故去掉were或者looked

【9】第二段最后一句We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured 前半部分說(shuō)我們逃跑了，后半部分說(shuō)沒(méi)人受傷，兩者應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故but改為and

【答案10】最后一段最后一句but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!，impressive 是元音開(kāi)頭的單詞，應(yīng)用an修飾，故a改為an