Question

【題目】隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPad已經(jīng)成為學生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂、閱讀電子書，又可以玩電子游戲。請你用英語給你校長寫一封信，談談你對你校學生使用iPad的情況。信的內(nèi)容包括以下幾點：

1．使用iPad對學生學習產(chǎn)生的好處。

2．使用iPad對學生產(chǎn)生的負面影響。

3．提出自己的建議并簡要說明理由。

注意：詞數(shù)120詞左右。

Dear Sir，

My name is Li Hua．I am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students．

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

My_name_is_Li_Hua.I_am_writing_to_show_my_concern_about_the_effects_of_modern_media_on_us_students．

Nowadays，iPads are very popular in our school．Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion．There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so on．In other words，it's helpful to our studies，especially our English learning．

However，each coin has two sides．Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere．What's worse，some even waste their precious time playing games．

In my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroom．I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration．

I am looking forward to your early reply．

Yours，

Li_Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達為正反方議論文。討論iPad對學習的影響，要寫出贊同的觀點和反對的觀點，及自己的觀點，文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：引句→ 正方觀點闡述→反方觀點闡述→自己的觀點，論述兩種不同觀點主要是結(jié)合要點寫，要注意遣詞造句，自己的看法及建議沒有要點，需要學生自己發(fā)揮。此類習作要求學生有很好的英語思維能力。

【亮點說明】本文要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰合理。在本篇習作中，使用了一些從句，如同位語從句：Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion．There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music。再如定語從句：Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere．。除此之外，文章還使用了許多短語：in other words、waste…playing games、focus on等等。