【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉；

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Today I'd like to shares my personal experience in improving our English writing skills. The ability to write in English is becoming increasing important in English communication as well as in examinations. Thus, it was worth focusing our attention on.

In order to write a good essay, we should have a excellent command of over 2,000 frequently-used English word. It's necessary and useful for them to read or even recite beautiful English articles. Beside, as the saying goes, that practice makes perfect, so we should take every possible chance to write in English. According my personal experience, keep a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim

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這是一篇說明文。作者分享了自己提高英語寫作的一些方法技巧。

1. 考查固定用法。句意：今天我想和大家分享一下我個(gè)人在提高英語寫作技巧方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。短語would like to do sth.“想要做某事”后跟不定式，故shares改為share。

2. 考查副詞。句意：英語寫作能力在英語交流和考試中變得越來越重要。important是形容詞，要用副詞修飾。故increasing改為increasingly。

3. 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：因此，值得我們關(guān)注。全文講述的是一般事實(shí)，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。故was改為is。

4. 考查冠詞。句意：要寫好一篇文章，我們必須熟練掌握2000多個(gè)常用英語單詞。command做“要求”將是可數(shù)名詞，且excellent為元音音素開頭的單詞，故應(yīng)用不定冠詞an。故a改為an。

5. 考查名詞的數(shù)。word為可數(shù)名詞，其前有數(shù)詞2000修飾時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故word改為words。

6. 考查代詞。句意：對(duì)我們來說，閱讀甚至背誦漂亮的英語文章是必要和有用的。根據(jù)文中可知，講的是如何提高我們的英語寫作技能，用代詞us。故them改為us。

7. 考查副詞。句意：此外，俗話說，熟能生巧，所以我們應(yīng)該抓住每一個(gè)可能的機(jī)會(huì)用英語寫作。beside意為"在……旁邊；在……附近"，是介詞，besides意為"而且，也"，是副詞。故Beside改為Besides。

8. 考查固定用法。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，已有關(guān)系代詞as，that是多余的，故去掉that。

9. 考查固定搭配。句意：根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，每天寫日記是達(dá)到這個(gè)目的的好方法。according to意為"（表示依據(jù)）根據(jù)，按照"，是固定搭配。故According后添加to。

10.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，句中缺少主語，故用動(dòng)名詞短語keeping a diary every day作主語。故keep改為keeping。

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