Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so—because

【2】look—looking

【3】加the /my

【4】am—was

【5】去掉to

【6】danger—dangerous

【7】glass—glasses

【8】something—anything

【9】 for—as

【10】frightening—frightened

【解析】

【1】so—because；原句因果關(guān)系不成立，應(yīng)該是，之所以不會(huì)游泳是因?yàn)楹芘滤��?/span>

【2】look—looking；從句動(dòng)詞與主句主語具有邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，所以用動(dòng)名詞形式。

【3】加the /my；特指我對(duì)于水的恐懼、害怕。加定冠詞。

【4】am—was ；本文敘述的是過去的事情，應(yīng)用過去式。

【5】去掉to；see是及物動(dòng)詞，其后不接介詞。

【6】danger—dangerous；形容詞作后置定語。

【7】glass—glasses；glass是玻璃，glasses才是眼鏡。

【8】something—anything；在否定句和疑問句中something要改為anything。

【9】 for—as；句意：更糟糕的是，當(dāng)我還是小孩時(shí)，看見過鄰居溺水。故用as。

【10】frightening—frightened；修飾人用frightended，害怕的。