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【題目】90后出生的學(xué)生，思想特殊、行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。假如你是一名90后出生的學(xué)生劉林，請根據(jù)下表中所提供信息以"Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s"為題寫一篇英語演講稿，以消除人們的憂慮。

90后的境遇：面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱，所處環(huán)境競爭更加激烈。

人們的憂慮：1.注重自我，輕視合作；......

2.缺乏毅力，容易氣餒；......

3.盲目追求，渴望成名。......

我們的長處：敢于挑戰(zhàn)，......(請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，再列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。)

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.

Living in an environment full of fierce competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.

They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.

However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Of course, we still need to learn more from those experienced. Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于演講稿，根據(jù)提示信息的具體情況來行文。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)，然后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)和感受。此篇是演講稿寫作，應(yīng)要注意表達(dá)自己的情感在里面。2、分析文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，要依據(jù)提示詞語來行文。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Living in an environment full of fierce competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.動詞ing作伴隨狀語和插入定語從句；Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.和They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.是非限制性定語從句；and this is what it takes to do any job well.是表語從句等。此外，文章還使用了大量短語be faced with , Under these circumstances , be unwilling to, cooperate with, make…h(huán)ard for … to do，lack in，in time of, be eager to do, have the courage to do, take risks等,另外Besides, However, Firstly, In addition, Of course等的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。