Question

1．近年來，微信（Wechat）成為了人們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中必不可少的通訊工具，尤其在今年春�?jié)期間，"微信搶紅包熱"（Red envelop fever）風靡全國．請對這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇100詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容包括以下幾點：
1．使用微信的利與弊．
2．自己的看法和建議．
In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．_______．

Answer 1

分析 本文為話題作文．
話題背景為：春節(jié)期間，"微信搶紅包熱"（Red envelop fever）風靡全國
寫作主題可以為：少搶紅包，多面對面交流等
寫作要點為：1．使用微信的利與弊．
2．自己的看法和建議．

解答 In recent years，Wechat is becoming increasingly popular．"Red envelop"fever has swept the country especially during this Spring Festival．
There are many reasons for Wechat to be known．To begin with，Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．Next，Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people with its various functions，it is available everywhere at any time．
However，problems exist meanwhile．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，it may make communicating with others face to face less．Finally，our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study．
There is an doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by．

點評 【思路點撥】這是一篇應用文．這篇短文主要說明近年來，微信日益流行．尤其在春節(jié)期間，較之賀卡或手機短信，越來越多的人傾向于微信平臺了．"微信紅包"已經(jīng)風靡全國．作者在文中用了To begin with、Next來說明維信的益處，再用However和Finally來說明，有了微信的弊端．這篇范文，很符合當今形式的發(fā)展，是一篇佳作．