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9．Dreams can't be achieved easily．Just dreaming all day long without any action will bring about a sad ending．To achieve them，we should make progress step by step by putting what we think into practice．
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Answer 1

分析 Dreams can't be achieved easily．Just dreaming all day long without any action will bring about a sad ending．To achieve them，we should make progress step by step by putting what we think into practice．
夢想不容易實現(xiàn)．只想不做是空想．我們應(yīng)該行動，才能實現(xiàn)夢想．
寫作要點為：1，發(fā)表自己的觀點；2，舉例說明；3，建議．

解答 One possible version：
   Dreams won't come true themselves．As for me，what matters most is concrete action because action is to dreams what oars to ships．
   What I have experienced in the past three years can fully illustrate this point．When my life in high school started，so did my dram of being an excellent student，Ambitious as I was then，I did nothing but abandon myself to daydream in the first term，which ended with bad grades，Not resigned to the defeat，I decided to turn it around，After reflecting on what I had done，I realized I didn't take any concrete steps，merely dreaming．Since then，I have been focusing on study and I find the more I devote to it，the more I will gain．Now my study has improved sharply through three years'concrete action in contrast to the past．
Had it not been for concrete action，I would not achieve what I have desired now．

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