Question

1．最近你校就"狼來了"這則寓言故事及其寓意展開討論，大家踴躍發(fā)表各自的看法．請你根據(jù)下面所給的要點(diǎn)，給《21世紀(jì)高中生版》的"Your Words"欄目寫一篇英文稿件．要點(diǎn)如下：
  1、該故事的寓意
  2、怎樣做一個(gè)誠信的學(xué)生（舉例說明）
  3、你的看法 （誠信的重要性）
注意：1、詞數(shù) 100 左右；
  2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
  3、開頭以為你寫好．
Almost all of us heard the story"Here Comes the Wolf"when we were little kids．            ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于就"狼來了"這則寓言含義的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明該故事的寓意；二怎樣做一個(gè)誠信的學(xué)生；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible．句子里What 引導(dǎo)主語從句we can learn from the story，表示"我們從這個(gè)故事里學(xué)到的東西"；that引導(dǎo)表語從句 we must be honest；telling a lie is terrible是另一個(gè)表語從句，telling a lie 是動(dòng)名詞做主語．
我們從這個(gè)故事里學(xué)到的東西是，我們一定要誠實(shí)，說謊時(shí)可怕的．
2．By giving honest answers to questions in the exam，not only can we learn about our own strengths and weaknesses in our study，but we can help our teachers evaluate our study as well．句子里By giving honest answers to questions in the exam是方式狀語；not only 用于句首，句子can we learn about our own strengths and weaknesses in our study用了倒裝；but后面省略了also，和前面的not only 構(gòu)成固定短語．
在考試時(shí)誠實(shí)作答，不僅可以讓我們了解自己學(xué)習(xí)方面的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，而且也能幫助老師評估我們的學(xué)習(xí)．

解答       Almost all of us heard the story"Here Comes the Wolf"when we were little kids．What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明該故事的寓意）
As students，honesty is especially important．By giving honest answers to questions in the exam，not only can we learn about our own strengths and weaknesses in our study，but we can help our teachers evaluate our study as well．【高分句型二】Therefore，we can make great progress in our study．Besides，we should finish our homework independently and return books when it is due．If we promise to do something，we should keep our word and try our best to do it well．（怎樣做一個(gè)誠信的學(xué)生）
As far as I'm concerned，honesty is a good virtue．People who are honest can always gain others'respect．A liar is always looked down upon and once you lie，people will never believe you even if you speak the truth．Only in an honest way are we able to make more friends and gain their cooperation to achieve our goals（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．