Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

As we know, it was not easy for J.K Rowling to create Harry Potter. The idea for Harry Potter come to her while she was on a delayed train between Manchester and London. She wrote down her ideas on the back of envelope. She then continued to add flesh for the bones of the first Harry Potter story. During her creation, she had the extra burden of look after her baby and had to write with hand for a lack of typewriter. It was only in 1997 she completed the first Harry Potter story. After the first book, the success of each of the following titles was automatically. The fifth book sold about seven million copies the day when it was published. What makes the books so important are that they create a special literary bond between parents and children. In addition, much to the pleasant of the schoolchildren, Harry Potter has even become part of the school curriculum.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】come→came

【2】envelope前加an

【3】for→to

【4】look→looking

【5】with→by

【6】1997后面加that

【7】automatic

【8】when去掉

【9】are→is

【10】pleasant→pleasure

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了杰克.羅琳創(chuàng)造哈利波特系列小說的有關內(nèi)容。

【1】come→came 考查時態(tài)。本句的時間狀語是while she was on a delayed train between Manchester and London.這是過去的時間，所以主語應該使用一般過去時。

【2】envelope前加an 考查冠詞。名詞envelope（信封），是可數(shù)名詞，前面加不定冠詞an表示泛指。句意：她在一個信封的反面寫下自己的想法。

【3】for→to 考查固定搭配。動詞短語add...to...“把……加到……之上”；接著她就在第一部哈利波特的故事的里添加了很多鮮活的內(nèi)容

【4】look→looking 考查動名詞。介詞of的后面要接名詞或動名詞作賓語，故把look改為looking。

【5】with→by 考查介詞短語。by hand表示“用手地，手動地”；該短語在句中作為方式狀語。句意：由于沒有打字機，她不得不手寫書稿。

【6】1997后面加that 考查強調(diào)句型。本句強調(diào)時間狀語in 1997；強調(diào)句型的基本結構為：It is/was+被強調(diào)成分+that/who+其他成分；如果被強調(diào)成分是人，就使用that/who，如果被強調(diào)成分不是人，就使用that。

【7】automatically→automatic 考查形容詞。在英語中系動詞后面通常接形容詞構成系表結構，所以本句使用形容詞automatic和was構成系表結構。

【8】when去掉 考查狀語從句。在英語中，一些表示時間的名詞短語轉(zhuǎn)換成連詞，引導時間狀語從句。如the minute, the moment，the first time....。本句中the day引導時間狀語從句。

【9】are→is 考查主謂一致。當what引導的主語從句放在句首，謂語動詞用單數(shù)形式。讓這套書如此重要的是他們在你父母親和孩子之間創(chuàng)造了一個特殊的文學聯(lián)系。

【10】pleasant→pleasure 考查固定短語。短語to one's pleasure表示“讓某人高興的是”；類似的結構還有to one's joy/surprise等等。