Question

3．假如你是李晨，你看到美國學生Tom在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，找人幫他提高漢語水平，請根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封電子郵件．
1．樂意幫助；
2．勝任理由；
3．學習要求；
4．聯(lián)系方式（email地址：lichen@163．com）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese level．我從你網(wǎng)上發(fā)的帖子上得知你想提高你的漢語水平．
高分句型二：
Learning Chinese takes time．學習漢語是要花費時間的．
句型一 you want to improve your Chinese level．該句是一個由that引導的同位語從句，同位的名詞為post，同位語從句是用一個句子對某個抽象名詞進行解釋說明
句型二 Learning Chinese takes time．該句的主語為動名詞短語充當，動名詞短語作主語應注意謂語使用單數(shù)
此外，該文章還有以下高級詞匯和重要短語：learn from sb 收到某人的來信  be fit for 適合．．

解答 Dear Tom，
   This is Li Chen．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese level．（高分句型一）I'm quite interested in it，and I think I'm fit for it．I am a Chinese and I have been learning Chinese as a subject for many years．I'm outgoing，friendly and it's easy to get along well with me．（自我情況介紹）
   Learning Chinese takes time．（高分句型二）So if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practising it every day．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese，watch some Chinese movies or TV programs．（提出建議）
   Please contact me at lichen@163．com．
   Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Chen

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應的寫作要點．考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．