Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Have you been asked for money by some beggars who have disabilities while you’re

enjoying shopping? Do you have any pity for that kind of people or just feel afraid? For whatever reasons the number of disabled beggars bumming(行乞) along the street has increased rapidly.

Why are there so many disabled people begging in the street? The reasons are so various that we don’t need to understand. But we know that they do not lead an easy life. So we should help them in some ways.

The treatment for disabled people should go like this: First，accept them. Don’t be afraid of looking at the terrible shape of disabled. Try to treat

them equally. Because they are a part of the society.we can’t abandon them. The second is to help them as much as we could. If you can be a volunteer and do some work for the disabled people that would be very nice. That does good not only to disabled people but also to yourself，because you will feel good after your kind action.

So give an air of warmth to disabled people，and the world would be much better.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120詞就 “How to care for the disabled” 這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1) 對待殘疾人的正確態(tài)度；

(2) 你認為應(yīng)該如何幫助殘疾人；

(3) 殘疾人也應(yīng)該享有平等的權(quán)利。

(4)【寫作要求】

1. 可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The passage tells us that there are more and more beggars begging along the street. The main reason is that most of them lead a difficult life. So we should accept them and help them as much as possible.

I can’t agree more with the writer. Everyone is born equal, and the disabled are no exception .They are also part of our society and can also make contributions. So they should enjoy the same rights as we do. But as they have disabilities ,they may have come across different kinds of difficulties in their life, so we should try to help them.

As far as I am concerned, there are many ways to help the disabled, but the most important one is to help improve their living conditions. First, the government should provide the disabled with job opportunities so that they an earn a living .Besides, it’s a good idea for the government to give them necessary training for jobs. In this way they can earn money and support themselves, thus improving their life. Additionally, we should make public places accessible to them ,for example, wide doors for wheelchairs earphones in cinemas for the deaf, blind walking ways for the blind and so on.

All in all, only when we try every effort to improve the life of the disabled can they enjoy the same rights as we do.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于閱讀任務(wù)型寫作，根據(jù)所給的閱讀材料可以看出是寫有關(guān)怎樣對待殘疾人的問題。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀所給材料，弄清材料所提供的信息，告訴我們什么道理。2、所給的寫作內(nèi)容就是文章的總體框架，要在寫作內(nèi)容的范圍內(nèi)進行構(gòu)思和合理地展開想象。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如begging along the street；thus improving their life都用了非謂語作后置定語和狀語；I can’t agree more with the writer.這句是表示贊同對方觀點的佳句；so that they an earn a living用了狀語從句；only when we try every effort to improve the life of the disabled can they enjoy the same rights as we do.用了倒裝句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語come across；As far as I am concerned；All in all等以及副詞Additionally的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。