【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been developed very rapidly. From here you can travel everywhere by the sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connects with Beijing started being used, The places around our city is rich in natural resources. And we have enough supply in electricity and energy resources. The public order is nice. The government will support investors with many ways. We wish more foreign friend to invest in our city.

【答案】

【1】去掉me后的to

【2】set up 前加was

【3】develop改為developing

【4】去掉by后的the

【5】connects改為connected

【6】is改為are

【7】in改為of

【8】resource改為resources

【9】with改為in

【10】friend改為friends

【解析】

試題分析:本文介紹了作者城市的快速發(fā)展并以此希望更多的人來(lái)此投資

【1】去掉me后的to 考查let用法。Let sb do sth讓某人做某事，故去掉me后的to

【2】set up 前加was 考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：它（我們的城市）是在80年代的早期被建起來(lái)的。城市的建立應(yīng)該是被建立，所以要體現(xiàn)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故set up 前加was

【3】develop改為developing 考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：但是它發(fā)展的非�？臁，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)表示動(dòng)作從過(guò)去開(kāi)始一直到現(xiàn)在都在發(fā)生；現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)表示動(dòng)作從過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在一直在發(fā)生還有可能延續(xù)到將來(lái)。根據(jù)上下文的提示來(lái)看“城市的發(fā)展”應(yīng)該是一直在延續(xù)的，將來(lái)還有繼續(xù)發(fā)展的可能，所以時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)，故develop改為developing

【4】去掉by后的the 考查固定用法。By sea乘船/by the sea在海邊；句意：在這兒，你可以乘著船到處旅游。故去掉by后的the

【5】connects改為connected 考查非謂語(yǔ)。此句主語(yǔ)是freeway，謂語(yǔ)是started；所以connect是一個(gè)非謂語(yǔ)，connect用過(guò)去時(shí)表狀態(tài)修飾主語(yǔ)。句意：最近，另一條連接北京的高速公路開(kāi)始被使用。故connects改為connected

【6】is改為are 考查主謂一致。此句的主語(yǔ)是The places，所以謂語(yǔ)也應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故is改為are

【7】in改為of 考查介詞。be rich of ....很豐富，be rich in 在.....方面很富有；句意：在我們城市的周?chē)泻茇S富的自然資源。故in改為of

【8】resource改為resources 考查名詞。resource作“資源”講時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞，“豐富的自然資源”，可知resource是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故resource改為resources

【9】with改為in 考查介詞。supply with提供，供給；句意：我們有足夠的電力和能源供應(yīng)。故with改為in

【10】friend改為friends 考查名詞。句意：我們希望更多的外國(guó)朋友能夠來(lái)我們城市投資�！案嗟耐鈬�(guó)朋友”，friend應(yīng)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式，故friend改為friends

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