Question

某英語刊物正在進(jìn)行有關(guān)旅游的征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)以下提示，以Travelling為題目，用英語寫一篇短文，以便向該刊投稿。
1．旅游好處很多：領(lǐng)略大自然以及其他城市的美麗風(fēng)景；呼吸新鮮空氣；結(jié)交新朋友；放松自己，強(qiáng)身健體；
2．旅游常見問題：天氣因素；被人偷；可能受傷；
3．旅游的準(zhǔn)備工作：了解天氣情況；找個(gè)旅伴(travelling companion)相互照應(yīng)；小心謹(jǐn)慎；避免意外。
注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫；
3．詞數(shù)：100左右。
Travelling
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity. When you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. Thus you will relax.
But travelling is not always pleasant. For example, the weather can be changeable. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold in the rain while travelling. You may have your money stolen or may be injured.
Therefore, when going on a trip, you must prepare yourself carefully. You should have clear information about the weather, choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents. If so, you will surely enjoy yourself.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容要求1．旅游好處很多：領(lǐng)略大自然以及其他城市的美麗風(fēng)景；呼吸新鮮空氣；結(jié)交新朋友；放松自己，強(qiáng)身健體；2．旅游常見問題：天氣因素；被人偷；可能受傷；3．旅游的準(zhǔn)備工作：了解天氣情況；找個(gè)旅伴(travelling companion)相互照應(yīng)；小心謹(jǐn)慎；避免意外。由此分析應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，適當(dāng)用一些情態(tài)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)感情色彩。全文應(yīng)該用第二人稱形式表示是大眾化的人。另外，注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文包含所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)注意了句子開頭的變化。應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。使用了較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯。 如make friends with，F(xiàn)or example，be caught in the rain，while travelling ，so as to等等。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。如：thus, but，therefore,if so等等。