Question

假設(shè)你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席王林，你校要組織全體學(xué)生參觀中國(guó)科學(xué)技術(shù)館（China Science and Technology Museum）,你要在廣播中宣布此事，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇廣播通知：
參觀時(shí)間：本周六；
參觀安排：8：00在學(xué)校大門(mén)口集合；8:10統(tǒng)一乘校車前往；8:40在導(dǎo)游帶領(lǐng)下開(kāi)始參觀；11:30參觀結(jié)束，統(tǒng)一乘車返回；
注意事項(xiàng)：不要遲到；遵守展覽館的規(guī)章制度。
注意：
可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。
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Answer 1

May I have your attention .please? I have an important announcement to make. We are going to pay a visit to China Science and Technn'ogy Museum this Saturday. Make sure you arrive at the school gate before 8:00 a.m, we will set off at 8:10 a.m. by school bus together. At 8:40 a.m. we will begin our visit with a guide leading us. While visiting the museum, please obey the rules and regulations there. At about 11:30 a.m. our visit will come to an end. After that, we'll return by bus. I'm sure we will have a wonderful time there.
Don't be late, please. That's all. Thank you.

試題分析：本文是一篇口頭通知。寫(xiě)通知是高考常見(jiàn)的一種體裁。符合學(xué)生的生活實(shí)際。成文時(shí)應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.注意通知的基本格式；2.通知的內(nèi)容要齊全；參觀時(shí)間：本周六；參觀安排：8：00在學(xué)校大門(mén)口集合；8:10統(tǒng)一乘校車前往；8:40在導(dǎo)游帶領(lǐng)下開(kāi)始參觀；11:30參觀結(jié)束，統(tǒng)一乘車返回；注意事項(xiàng)：不要遲到；遵守展覽館的規(guī)章制度。3.人稱：第一人稱為主；4.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或?qū)��?lái)時(shí)；5.使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次；6.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)：While visiting the museum, please obey the rules and regulations there. we will begin our visit with a guide leading us.使用了短語(yǔ)：pay a visit to，Make sure，set off，come to an end，have a wonderful time