Question

【題目】假定你是身在英國的交換生李華,學(xué)習(xí)之余你想在周末到當(dāng)?shù)匾患铱Х瑞^兼職。請根據(jù)下面招聘廣告寫一封應(yīng)聘信。

Work for COFFEE BEANS

Every cafe at COFFEE BEANS has the same aims: to create family-like teams and to give excellent customer service. Join us as a Team Member, Assistant Manager or Cafe Manager, depending on your skills and experience.

—choose the hours you work

—get management experience

—share your love of coffee

Email us at jobs@coffeebeans. co. uk

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir or madam,

I’m writing in answer to your advertisement to apply for a post of the Team Member. Unlike most of my Chinese friends and classmates, I like coffee instead of tea. I like the rich fragrance of coffee and the cultures and traditions involved in it. Moreover, COFFEE BEANS is famous for its service and management, so I want to work for it and get management experience which is beneficial for my future career choice. I think your family like teams will make me feel at home and I'll make as many contributions as I can to the cafe. Finally, as a student, I think I can work for two whole days at weekends.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，假定你是身在英國的交換生李華，學(xué)習(xí)之余你想在周末到當(dāng)?shù)匾患铱Х瑞^兼職。請根據(jù)下面招聘廣告寫一封應(yīng)聘信。第二，人稱以第一人稱為主。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為兩段。第一段，寫信的目的；自己的愛好、這份工作對于自己的益處和自己的優(yōu)勢等。第二段，期待回復(fù)。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語：apply for，instead of，service and management，be beneficial for，make me feel at home等。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子：which引導(dǎo)的定語從句Moreover, COFFEE BEANS is famous for its service and management, so I want to work for it and get management experience which is beneficial for my future career choice.省略that的賓語從句 Finally, as a student, I think I can work for two whole days at weekends.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接：unlike，moreover，so，finally等。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。