Question

【題目】假定你是李華，于2019年3月2日搭乘某航空公司航班（Flight HZH9211）回國。到機場后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了行李箱�，F(xiàn)你用英語給航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。

要點包括：

1. 陳述寫信原因；

2. 描述行李箱；

3. 期待回復并表示感謝。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger

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Regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline, returning from abroad on March 2nd, 2019. Unfortunately, I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.

The suitcase is a yellow one, 80cm long, 40cm wide and 25cm thick, with my name tag on the bank. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends. It will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find it.

I would appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封信給某航空公司，告知航空公司你在機場遺失了行李箱，請航空公司幫你找回。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 陳述寫信原因；

2. 描述行李箱；

3. 期待回復并表示感謝。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

get lost；ask for sb.’s help；personal files；scientific materials；buy sth. for sb.；hear from sb.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.

2. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.

3. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.

4. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends.

5. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改