Question

19．請(qǐng)你給外教Jeff寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．告訴他你在學(xué)校演講比賽中獲得了第一名；
2．感謝他在口語(yǔ)及演講技巧上給予的幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50．
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
      3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jeff，
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I can't wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest．我等不及要告訴你我在演講比賽中獲得了第一名的成績(jī)．
高分句型二：
I know that without your help，I could have gone nowhere．我知道要不是你的幫忙，我可能什么成績(jī)都沒有．
句型一 I can't wait to tell you that I took first place…該句中that后面跟了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)詞tell是一個(gè)可以接雙賓語(yǔ)的詞，tell sb sth 此處 that I took first place 是直接賓語(yǔ)，that在句中不作句子成分
句型二…without your help，I could have gone nowhere..此處是一個(gè)由介詞without引起的特殊虛擬語(yǔ)氣，主句應(yīng)使用could\should\might have done sth

解答 One possible version：
Dear Jeff，
    I can't wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest．（高分句型一）（說(shuō)明原因）I know that without your help，I could have gone nowhere．（高分句型二）Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive．With your great help，I faced the challenge confidently．I really appreciate what you've done for me．Thank you very much!（表示感謝）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本書面表達(dá)為一封電子郵件，該類作文在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意用簡(jiǎn)潔明了的話講所需內(nèi)容闡述清楚，切忌用詞啰嗦累贅．