Question

假如你是高三年級學(xué)生李華。開學(xué)之初，你的英語老師Mr Wang希望掌握每位同學(xué)真實的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求高三復(fù)習(xí)建議。請按以下要點用英語給寫一封信。

1. 英語的重要性；

2. 自己目前的英語實際水平；

3. 自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；（兩點）

4. 對高三英語復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)的建議。（兩點）

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

 

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m very happy to write to you talking about my English study.

 

 

 

 

Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m very happy to write to you talking about my English study. As we know, English is the most widely used language in the world, and having a good command of it does good to/ is quite beneficial to our future development. Therefore, it’s essential to learn English well.

 

However, I’m not very good at English. Although I speak fluent English, I have difficulty in writing English compositions. In addition, I often make grammatical mistakes because I’m confused by English grammar, which makes me a little worried, since the college entrance exam is around the corner.

 

In order to do well in the coming entrance exam, I suggest that you explain the grammar which is related to the exam systematically and make sure we master it. Besides, you can require us to translate several sentences every day which are helpful to our English writing.

 

I firmly believe, with our joint efforts, we’ll achieve success in English eventually!

 

Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

本題是一篇書信文體的寫作，題意和要點簡單，考生應(yīng)不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，考生重點要先仔細(xì)審題，審題主要包括以下幾個方面：（1）主體時態(tài)；（2）主體人稱；（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是對于內(nèi)容要點的把握要準(zhǔn)確到位。再者考生需注意盡可能使句子表達(dá)形式的多樣，盡量使用一些較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)和較高級的詞匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。

對于應(yīng)用文中書信類問題，寫作要簡潔明了，直入主題。對于提綱作文寫作要領(lǐng)，要遵循六部原則。第一步：審題；第二步：抓中心，列要點，列出寫作提綱；第三步：選詞組句；第四步：連句成篇；第五步：復(fù)查糾錯；第六步：書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。

亮點說明：

例文中首先就陳述自己為英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識，運用連詞as引導(dǎo)從句，動名詞短語如having a good command of作主語。文章中運用定語從句如I’m confused by English grammar, which makes me a little worried，名詞性從句I suggest that you explain the grammar，非謂語動詞, with our joint efforts, we’ll achieve等高級語法結(jié)構(gòu)。全文行文簡潔流暢。

考點：提綱作文