Question

【題目】今天是世界讀書日，請你用英語向大家推薦一本你最喜歡的書。

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要求：

1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)要求：100詞左右。

My favorite book

Hello, everyone. I’d like to put forward a book for you for World Book Day,_________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My favorite book

Hello, everyone. I’d like to put forward a book for you for World Book Day, which is titled The adventures of Tom Sawyer, a famous novel by well-known American writer Mark Twain. Published in 1876, the novel has been popular up to more than a century and influenced generation after generation.

The works is very interesting, including many funny stories about a naughty but smart boy — Tom Sawyer. It describes a series of adventures that Tom Sawyer and his friends have experienced. The humorous style makes the works popular around the world. If you take an interest in the works, you can find not only the English but also Chinese version in our library on the fifth floor.

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求給讀者介紹一本書。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇介紹說明文；今天是世界讀書日，你用英語向大家推薦一本你最喜歡的書——《湯姆索亞歷險(xiǎn)記》；內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括你推薦這本書的原因以及該書的出版信息等。介紹書籍、影視作品時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求及圖片信息，確定關(guān)鍵信息，如：The adventures of Tom Sawyer（書名）、Mark Twain（作者）、Published in 1876（出版年限）、in our library（在哪里能找到這本書）及推薦該書的理由——many funny stories about a naughty but smart boy，a series of adventures。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

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