Question

1. 據(jù)報(bào)道，在過(guò)去的十年間，北極圈內(nèi)的平均氣溫比以前升高了2-3攝氏度。
2. 要求各國(guó)減少溫室氣體排放，拯救地球。
3. 2010年新年剛開(kāi)始，極度寒冷的天氣襲擊了亞洲、歐洲和北美洲。惡劣的天氣正是全球變暖的后果。
就以上素材號(hào)召同學(xué)們行動(dòng)起來(lái)積極應(yīng)對(duì)地球變暖
注意：1. 開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出；2。詞數(shù):100詞左右；3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
Dear fellow students,
It is reported that the average temperature within the Arctic Circle has risen by 2-3 degrees Celsius in the past ten years.                            
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Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
It is reported that the average temperature within the Arctic Circle has risen by 2-3 degrees Celsius in the past ten years. At the Copenhagen Climate Summit 2009 all nations were required to reduce the greenhouse gas emission to save the earth. At the beginning of 2010, extremely cold weather hit Asia, Europe, and North America, which is the evidence of global warming. As is known to all, our environment has been worsening due to human activity. If we don’t take effective measures now, human beings will not be able to survive in the future. If we can save energy, recycle waste and plant more trees, we can make the earth a better place. So let’s take action from now on! Let’s save the earth.

試題分析：本文為一篇“號(hào)召同學(xué)們行動(dòng)起來(lái)積極應(yīng)對(duì)地球變暖”英語(yǔ)倡議書(shū)。倡議對(duì)象的稱呼已寫(xiě)好。首先寫(xiě)清楚發(fā)出此倡議的原因（地球變暖現(xiàn)狀）；簡(jiǎn)要概述一下文章已經(jīng)提到的三段素材。然后交代地球變暖對(duì)人類的重大惡劣影響，接著是寫(xiě)保護(hù)地球的具體措施。結(jié)尾要表示發(fā)出號(hào)召和希望。最后也可以寫(xiě)上發(fā)倡議者的名稱。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：倡議書(shū)的寫(xiě)作，先寫(xiě)對(duì)發(fā)出倡議對(duì)象的稱呼。2、正文：（1）寫(xiě)清楚發(fā)出此倡議的原因或目的。只有交代清楚倡議活動(dòng)的目的、意義即重要性，倡議對(duì)象才能理解、才能采取自覺(jué)的行動(dòng)來(lái)響應(yīng)，否則就很難響應(yīng)，起不到倡議應(yīng)有的作用。（2）重點(diǎn)是寫(xiě)倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求及要求做到的具體事項(xiàng)。這部分一般是分條開(kāi)列，以求清晰、明確。3、結(jié)尾要表示倡議者的決心和希望。4、最后要寫(xiě)上發(fā)倡議者的名稱。