Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition between 100 and 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生，你的英語老師要求寫一篇周記，敘述你所經(jīng)歷過的一件事情，它必須體現(xiàn)出你的情緒變化。同時，老師還提供了如下一組表情供參考。(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名)

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Answer 1

【答案】Lihua, my close friend, is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school. I am so proud of him.

But something unhappy happened. Last week, when we were taking the mid-term English exam, I suddenly found that he was copying something from cell phone but the teacher didn’t find this at all. I didn’t know what to do，feeling upset and sad. Finally, I decided to reveal the truth, even though he is my best friend. I talked with him after the exam and pointed out that we should not cheat just for a good result, thus lose our faith. As a result, he came to realize his mistake and we went to the head teacher’s office together. I was pleased that he admitted his mistake.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文，要求考生寫一篇周記，敘述所經(jīng)歷過的一件事情并體現(xiàn)出情緒變化。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時為主

結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分法

要求：1. 敘述事情的經(jīng)過；

2. 體現(xiàn)出情緒變化。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

close friend；give sb. the impression of；many times；be honored as；be proud of；the mid-term English exam；cell phone；not…at all；decide to；even though；best friend；talk with；point out；lose faith；as a result；come to realize等

第三步：連詞成句

1. Lihua, my close friend, is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school.

2. But something unhappy happened.

3. When we were taking the mid-term English exam, I suddenly found that he was copying something from cell phone but the teacher didn’t find this at all.

4. I decided to reveal the truth even though he is my best friend.

5. I talked with him after the exam and pointed out that we should not cheat just for a good result, thus lose our faith.

6. He came to realize his mistake and we went to the head teacher’s office together.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Finally；

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：and；

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but；

4.表因果關(guān)系：As a result；for；thus；so等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改