Question

7．健康對我們來說非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康．請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以"Good Ways to Keep Healthy"為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文，倡議"健康生活"，從三個方面說明如何保持健康．短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
1    food             a balanced diet，vegetables，fruit，less meat…
2    exercise       do more exercise，take a walk，play ball games…
3    happiness    keep happy，make friends，smile…
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy．But do you know the ways to keep us healthy？（點明文章主題）
First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lotof vegetables and fresh fruit，but we'd better eat less meat．Different kinds of food are necessary，and it's also important to eat a balanced diet．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．We can take walks after dinner，we can walk to school instead of taking a bus，and after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends．We should try to do more exercise every day．Above all，happiness is another way to keep healthy．When we are lonely or unhappy，try to make friends．It is a good way to keep us happy．If you smile often，you also feel happy．So，being happy is to be healthy．（保持身體健康的方法）．

Answer 1

分析 這是倡議"健康生活"的一篇作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明文章主題；二保持身體健康的方法．
高分句型：
1．First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but that we'd better eat less meat句子里．First用于列舉，和下面的Then，Above all呼應(yīng)；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句we need to have healthy eating habits； we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but that we'd better eat less meat是并列的賓語從句．
首先，我們需要飲食健康，這就意味著我們要吃大量的新鮮蔬菜和水果，但是最好少吃肉．
2．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．句子里動名詞playing sports every day 做主語；keep fit做賓補，表示"保持健康"．
然后，每天運動也能夠有助于我們保持健康．

解答 Good Ways to Keep Healthy
    It is very important for us to keep healthy．But do you know the ways to keep us healthy？（點明文章主題）
    First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but we'd better eat less meat．【高分句型一】Different kinds of food are necessary，and it's also important to eat a balanced diet．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．【高分句型二】We can take walks after dinner，we can walk to school instead of taking a bus，and after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends．We should try to do more exercise every day．Above all，happiness is another way to keep healthy．When we are lonely or unhappy，try to make friends．It is a good way to keep us happy．If you smile often，you also feel happy．So，being happy is to be healthy．（保持身體健康的方法）

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