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3．假定你是李華，美國(guó)交換生Peter曾在你校留學(xué)，你校校長(zhǎng)想邀請(qǐng)他父親Smith作為嘉賓，參加新學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)典禮，請(qǐng)你代他寫一封邀請(qǐng)信，說(shuō)明有關(guān)事項(xiàng)（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、意義等），通過(guò)電子郵件發(fā)給他．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，美國(guó)交換生Peter曾在你校留學(xué)，你校校長(zhǎng)想邀請(qǐng)他父親Smith作為嘉賓，參加新學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)典禮，請(qǐng)你代他寫一封邀請(qǐng)信，通過(guò)電子郵件發(fā)給他．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：說(shuō)明有關(guān)事項(xiàng)（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、意義等）    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：on behalf of 代表；the opening ceremony of 開(kāi)幕式；live a happy life過(guò)一個(gè)幸福的生活；in advance提前
 I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）
I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 am．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
      Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．