Question

假設(shè)你校英語社團(tuán)舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法規(guī)； 2. 注意舉止文明。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 題目已經(jīng)擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

On the Way to School

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

On the Way to School

Recently, on my way to school, I have thought a great deal about the idea that “civilization starts from me”. We all want to live in a society in which people follow rules and norms, but we can’t change other people --- we can only change ourselves.

On my way to school, I leave my home, walk down my street, cross at the crossing and wait for the bus. This process provides plenty of opportunities to act in a civilized way. For instance, I walk in an orderly manner along the sidewalk and I do not throw any trash onto the ground. These are good manners no matter where I’m walking. Then, when I get to the crossing, I wait until the intersection is clear and the traffic light has changed before I cross the street. These are the traffic laws, so I know that I should observe them. When waiting for the bus, I do not cut anyone else in line, On the bus, I take a seat politely and do not bother any other passengers.

Civilization clearly starts from me --- I can’t control others or perfectly understand their reasons for disobeying manners. But I am proud to follow the famous motto of Gandhi: “Be the change you want to see in the world.”

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設(shè)你校英語社團(tuán)舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法規(guī)； 2. 注意舉止文明。[來源需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意詞數(shù)120左右

【亮點說明】We all want to live in a society in which people follow rules and norms, but we can’t change other people --- we can only change ourselves.這里含有一個定語從句；These are the traffic laws, so I know that I should observe them.這里含有一個賓語從句。

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